You have provided a somewhat proficient analysis of how your sequence would appeal to your target audience, referring to some examples; however, you need to elaborate on the importance of having a target audience, and why you have chosen this age group as your target audience (thrill seekers etc.)You also need to refer to more examples from your sequence that will appeal to your audeince
You have provided a somewhat proficient analysis of how your sequence would appeal to your target audience, referring to some examples; however, you need to elaborate on the importance of having a target audience, and why you have chosen this age group as your target audience (thrill seekers etc.)You also need to refer to more examples from your sequence that will appeal to your audeince
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